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Do you agree that the song should be made into a remix of some sort? I believe they should add more then just,”Dream On.”The song, “Dream On” by Aerosmith includes a lots of literary elements such as repetition and imagery. I also believe to anyone that this song could of been better. In this critique I will be talking about how they should make the song stronger to the listener including more literary elements like imagery and repetition.
“Dream on Dream on dream until your dream comes true.” I understand when you say,”Dream On,” over a thousand times it gets old, you should add something else like in the beginning and include more dialogue. It should also include some imagery if you name the song “Dream on”, it really should be replaced with all the repetition that you use. I believe that these changes should be added in a remix.
“Yeah, sing with me sing for the year sing for the laughter, sing for the tear, sing with me, if it’s just for today maybe tomorrow the good lord will take you away.” In this part of the song I believe it should not involve god or anything that would involve Christianity, because people who don’t believe in the bible may be offended. The song sounds great, but you really need to think about getting rid of any religious quotations and put something else like rhythm or some rhyme scheme.
Rhythm and rhyme is used in the song to make it sound very good. If they made a remix to the song I bet the song would be on the top ten, but only if they make the song longer better and stronger to the person listening. The rhythm and rhyme scheme used is when they say, “Yeah sing with me Sing for the year, sing with me if its just for today maybe tomorrow the good lord will tai you away.”
“Guitar Opening,” This part is at the very beginning, it takes up a quarter of the song it should be replaced with more imagery and or repetition.
If these changes are made this song, I am sure that I am not the only one who would like the remix. Thats all any song really needs is repetition, rhyme, imagery and rhythm.