Five Star Hotel

Nervous? Asked Alice as my face turned pale. I walked up the steps. “Yes, now leave me alone I am being forced to do this. I will tell your mother when we get home,” I squealed. “Oh stop it you you’ll survive I’ve been on this ride millions of times,” said Alice exaggerating. “What’s the worst that could happen?” Alice said irritatedly. “Umm,” I answered as I stared at her in a silly face.

It was our turn in line, “WELCOME TO THE FABULOUS FIVE STAR HOTEL RIDE!” That man almost exploded my ear drums! “PLEASE HAND ME YOUR TICKETS!” the man said. Alice handed him to crinkled orange tickets. “ALONG FOR THE RIDE!” the man scream.

Carefully, I sat down inside the cart. It looked so old I couldn’t trust it. The whole cart would move just by my breathing. I was very horrified and the ride hadn’t even started. When Alice got in the cart the ride began. I closed my eyes and couldn’t open them I heard Alice giggling at me. “I hate you!” I whispered under my breath. “Oh stop crying! ‘ Alice said in a sightly irritated voice. Suddenly the ride stooped, and we were at the last floor of the haunted hotel floor; 13 to be exact.

“Alice is this supposed to happen?” I asked her shockingly “I…I….I don’t think so” she said trembling. Darkness filed the place. Everything was silent for next few minutes. A man broke the loud silence, “GIRLS,” he said is a strong voice, “Girls are you okay?” We could hear the sirens of the police. “I think so,” Alice answered. They answered rapidly, “Everything is going to be okay. The ride stooped because the power when out; if you would like to you can step out of the cart onto floor 13.” The only thing you could see was Alice’s glow in the dark bracelet. We used it as a guide to step out of the cart and I slipped quite a few times but I was okay. It was freezing on floor 13. I found a comfortable spot and sat. Alice found herself another spot on the other side of the room. I was very mad at her; and she knew it.

After a few minutes witch seemed like an eternity Alice broke the harsh silence, “are you mad at me?” I tried my hardest to ignore her. Suddenly I heard a loud scream. My heart started to pound as if it was going to jump out of my chest, it was Alice who was screaming! “Alice, Alice! Where are you?” I started to panic and fainted as I felt someone or something dragging me!

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